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Post by Hiruko Koudo on May 2, 2012 9:45:04 GMT -1
So, one thing that has kinda been bugging me about the Tialka story is one of the plotholes that I feel needs clearing up. Well, just explained really. I've just been thinking about how each character can travel to other worlds. At the moment, it just seems like they wander through space which is kinda...well, IMPOSSIBLE. Even in fantasy worlds, it's still a little farfetched. So, I had an idea that each world has some sort of portal device that exists in magic. Many worlds know of this portal but only a few skilled individuals can use/or be taught it (in our case, all of our characters on each world may use it since they managed to get to Tialka). I thought that this portal could be called 'The Passage of Space' since it is a safe passage through space without actually being there. In Hiruko's background story, he is able to find and inhabit his own homeworld since he was gifted with godly powers. The invite he sends out from Tialka affects creatures who travel through the Passage of Space and they can choose either to land on Tialka or not (or in some cases, they have no choice, they just randomly land there like in Kiryu's case). Tell me what you think, I'd really like to clear this up
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Post by Seirei Hisakata on May 4, 2012 18:29:12 GMT -1
The passage of space does sound like a good idea =]
As for characters who randomly arrived in Tialka without knowing how, it could be (in my head) very much like Kingdom Hearts. You know, when the 'door' kind of appears where it is needed. Like you know when Sora is sinking in the sea and suddenly kerpow lots of random princess circles.
That's the only way I can think of it xD But what I mean is that, for the characters who don't know about the Passage, the magic pull of Tialka/Hiruko's invitations could take them to a place in their world, like a cave and they end up in the Passage of Space. Sorry if I'm being confusing.
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Post by Hiruko Koudo on May 4, 2012 20:38:37 GMT -1
No I get you completely. And I like the idea of those who don't know how they got there Wanted to clarify this because Hiruko goes into 'The Passage of Space' at the end of my novel ^^
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Post by Seirei Hisakata on May 5, 2012 14:56:16 GMT -1
Hehe good good Ohh that would make sense! 'Specially about how he found Tialka first. How's the first chapter coming along? For some reason when I started writing a story a while ago, I did chapter one, then 4, then 2 and 3 xD
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Post by Hiruko Koudo on May 5, 2012 17:32:52 GMT -1
I updated the thread about my novel but I'll repeat, I'm on about 5 pages of size 12 Times New Roman font And that's also normal A4 size on word ^^ So quite a bit Hoping to round it off soon so that I can upload it to FictionPress and you can read it I was soooooooooo tempted to start on Chapter 3...but I decided to start at the start coz I get a bit OCD in that kinda stuff
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Post by Kurai Hisakata on May 5, 2012 21:46:20 GMT -1
I know, I saw it when it went up, I just thought you may have gotten a bit further tis all lol. Haha yeah, some chapters are easier to write than others cos you wanna skip straight to the good stuff, but yeah you've gotta be organised and try to lead up to it, which annoys me sometimes. Well, good luck with it Have you asked Gina about the passage idea yet?
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Post by Mira-Neiva Fadiele-Koudo on May 5, 2012 21:56:08 GMT -1
I LIKE IT. There's my contribution Sorry I haven't been very active lately :/ But I really do like this idea, it did used to bug me about how they travelled through space without dying. I'm assuming that the passage is more or less invisible, or at least transparent, so that when you're travelling around, you can see planets and stuff
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Post by Kiryu on Jul 23, 2012 10:52:51 GMT -1
The passage of space does sound like a good idea =] As for characters who randomly arrived in Tialka without knowing how, it could be (in my head) very much like Kingdom Hearts. You know, when the 'door' kind of appears where it is needed. Like you know when Sora is sinking in the sea and suddenly kerpow lots of random princess circles. And that was how it happened, one day Kiryu was chilling in hell (eternal damnation and all). Suddenly it all turned to water and the next thing he knew (despite not drowning) there she was, Snow White, sitting there staring back at him. There was also heartless and keys, but Kiryu's passage through space is a copyright-infriction filled journey for another day
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